Animation is great, it flows nicely and the drawings have presence. But if this is the standard of good writing, then i am disappointment in newgrounds. Not only are parodies taking over the portal. Now these lazy limp wrist cartoons are taking place of parodies, almost like a parody of parodies. When a script relies on bad jokes and slurred voices, you can tell the writing was nonexistent or fully inspired by ONEY or Egoraptor. But what flash animator isn't trying to be someone they aren't.
What amazes me most of all is how beautiful the animation was in comparison to the script. How did you find the passion and drive to do this? Either you ran on cocaine and coffee or you are truly passionate about this Naruto parody parody.